Monday, May 16, 2011

My P.I 2011 Term 1

PI Matrix

Expert
 Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour (?)
 Some interaction with the audience
 Audience is attentive and interested
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of the work for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures
Mostly reads the info from the presentation

Novice
 Reads the words on the presentation
Clearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

11 comments:

  1. You obviously chose a topic that you were really interested in. Your love of rabbits comes through so strongly. It's not a good idea to read what is written on a PowerPoint. Next time you make a PowerPoint you could just put lots of pictures on and just a few words, then read or talk. Your pictures were fantastic, but you need to make sure your photos are from Creative Commons. I really enjoyed your PI, Briar. Good job.

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  2. Great PI Briar!
    Bunnies are soooooo cute. You spoke loud and clear. And you had a very interesting topic. Next time you should get ALL the pictures yourself and not from Google.
    -Hannah and Alana

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  3. Nice P.I. Next Time you could have practised more and chose a topic you did not know about. u had heaps of info
    sam camryn luke

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  4. GREAT topic for your PI Briar and the amount of breeds was amazing!

    Next time get your pics of flickr and maybe have your speech on paper rather than reading from the screen.Maybe also brush up on those spelling errors but apart from that EXCELLENT job =)

    Rebecca and Jaime

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  5. Good P.i briar

    We think you did well at speking clear

    Next time you could do a spell check and speak a bit louder

    from ANNALEISE Limda and Caitlin

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  6. you chosse a very good topic you had even witen that in your own words you had very good photos but next time dont get that much photos off the internet and a bit more info


    from natalya and cindy

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  7. good job you had heaps of information but maybe you could have changed bits that we thought wernt true like the hare as big as a ruler which its probably smaller and about the breeds we dont think some of those were right but your pictures and info were really good but get tyour photos of creative commons because its a legal but apart from that great job.
    Maddi,Soap,Sara,Ana

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  8. Great p.i Briar.

    we think everyone was interested in your awesome bunny/rabbit p.i because you named all the breds.

    you nead to work on your speach and your spelling.

    but great p.i.

    from thot,cam and aidan

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  9. great pi, you had lots of info. But next time you could make it a bit longer. Maybe you could pick a more in the moment topic. Good work briar you writ it in your own words.

    From Ty Tom Sean chaz

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  10. you topic was good you should of had a sipct





    harry and aidie

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  11. Hi bair that was a very cuat bunny.hey I've got a joke for u frogs go rabbiat but rabbiats don't go frog.

    I love that little bunny in the snow and the one cat trying to be a bunny. I never knew that there were that many types of bunnys and rabbiats. just next time could u please tell us a little more facts.ow and u sould bring a bunny to school

    from saul

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