Tuesday, March 29, 2011

Visaul Language.




I really like this poem because I acualy been there and it was so cool and I like my picture.
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5 comments:

  1. Alanas e portfolioApril 5, 2011 at 3:11 PM

    I think you need to colour in the backround, and make Castle Rock the actual shape! And your writing is getting tider!

    Alana :)

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  2. sophie's 2010eportfolioApril 5, 2011 at 3:15 PM

    good job but next time put some more colour in it and maybe in sted of green use brighter but apart from that great

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  3. saras eportfolioApril 5, 2011 at 3:15 PM

    I think you should do a background your writing is getting better but goodwork

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  4. Natalya's EportfolioApril 5, 2011 at 3:18 PM

    great work but you need to have a bit more color keep it up

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  5. JaimeApril 7, 2011 at 5:09 PM

    Cool but you need a little bit more colour and your work is neater but good job girl

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